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Yes I am proud and I am not right?

Yes I am proud and I am not right?
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Copyright: EDITH SEGUIN (nainnain) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 83 N: 1282] (6259)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-07
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon D 80, SIGMA 70 X 300
Exposure: f/5.6
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-10 14:48
Viewed: 4322
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Yes indeed proud and he has the right, of course, it can be proud of its underside pretty clear.
Of course you all recognized
Generally the sparrows are not too appreciated as very intrusive.
Yet I find as beautiful as some other birds
Nothing more was said about it, except it comes with tits and finches eat in the same dish.
Has your comments good or bad
Thank you, good night.

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  • NinaM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 773 W: 3 N: 1157] (4077)
  • [2007-12-10 14:52]

Bonsoir Edith, belle photo de moineau! Quelle belle lumière et j'aime beaucoup la pose du moineau, il a un regard rempli d'espoir en regardant vers le haut comme ça! Belle composition, beau cadrage, en prime un beau background. Je pense moi aussi que c'est ma première visite et j'en suis fort aise Édith! Merci!


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  • Luis52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1175 W: 8 N: 4240] (15809)
  • [2007-12-10 15:00]

Hola Edith. Vaya hermosa foto y exelente la pose, este pequeño pajarillo debe estar muy orgulloso de su especie. Gran calidad y nitidez en la toma. bello el fondo tambien.
Saludos Edith.

Hi Edith,
Admirable picture!
A very delicate bird!
Excellent coloration and details.
I liked much of this work!
Congratulations and TFS!
José Roberto

I find it interesting how we project feeling onto the creatures and then an apt title which fits...this in an indirect way to someone who closely observes, shows your own true interest in nature and the psychology behind it.

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6595 W: 89 N: 15659] (65489)
  • [2007-12-10 16:26]

it seem to sing too..eheheh..very good position and POV,thanks for share,Luciano

hello edith,
sparrows are beautiful birds and i liked them as i can shoot them at my place too, you have captured this sparrow beautifully, sharp image with good details of the plumage,
well done,
tfs & regards

zbyt mocne swiatlo , puste pixele sa mocno widoczne po prawej jego stronie :(

En effet, il semble très fier, belle pose, beaux détails et belle composition avec couleurs naturelles.
Je ne suis que de passage ma mère a encore besoin de moi.

Birds usualy will stay alert and look around at all time. Nice timing for such an angle for this expression.
Best regards,

Bonjour Edith,
très belle photo et très belle pose de ce jeune moineau domestique, tu as bien profité de la lumière ce week-end a ce que je vois, les couleurs sont superbes et la mise au point excellente, comme d'hab quoi !!!!
composition parfaite avec un encadrement très bien choisi,
bravo pour ce piaf Edith ..... Piaf Edith, Piaf Edith, ca me rapelle un truc ca

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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 67 N: 645] (6814)
  • [2007-12-10 22:51]

Quel poseur !
Bonne journée.

Hello Edith,
A fine pose and the bird is captured with fine details in the plumage!
Colour palette is attractive, fine light and the sparrow stands out nicely on the blurry background!
Pablo -

Bonjour Edith,

Bonne présentation de ce petit moineau. Bonne netteté. Belle lumière et couleurs.
Bonne journée,

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  • gannu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 988 W: 4 N: 3277] (14761)
  • [2007-12-11 1:40]

Edith, Lovely expression of the bird in focus. The mood and the shot clarity is amazing. Ganesh

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1739 W: 224 N: 6872] (24909)
  • [2007-12-11 4:12]

Great title for this shot Edith :)
Gorgeous capture of this stretching Sparrow.
It's leg looks almost translucent!!
Great pose which leaves the viewer wondering what this guy is looking at... adding interest to the photo.
Natural colours and great lighting. Yes there are some OE areas yet you have made the best of the harsh lighting.
Brilliant composition as well.
Well done,

Hi edith,
excellent composition,TFS.

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3396 W: 172 N: 3310] (10940)
  • [2007-12-11 7:08]

Hello Edith,
Lovely capture of the Tree Sparrow in a fine pose. He looks very proud of himself! Sharp details, natural colours and a fine composition.
Many thanks, Ulla

bonjour edith
effectivement il est beau,net et avec les couleurs juste.
j'aime sa pose et l'eclat du flash dans l'oeil.
un poil trop exposé sur l'epaule droite mais on ne va pas se plaindre quand il y a un rayon de soleil.
PS:TC kenko commandé aujourd'hui

Bonjour Edith,
great pose of the Sparrow which stands mighty proud indeed!
captured well in perfect exposure and focus!
the sharpness on the plummage is amazing
very well done and pleasing

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4072 W: 133 N: 7096] (23735)
  • [2007-12-11 8:25]

Hi Edith.
Wonderful shot and pictured scene. I also like the nice and exact title. Great close distance and perfect details o the sparrow and twig. Smooth BG is very impressive. Its coloration and illumination are so attractive. Framing and composition of the picture are wonderful too. My compliments and best regards.

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  • PeterZ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5137 W: 166 N: 13121] (49139)
  • [2007-12-11 11:35]

Hello Edith,
A photo with an impressive pose of the bird. Great sharpness and very beautiful natural colours. Very good DOF and composition.

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 998 W: 65 N: 1270] (5199)
  • [2007-12-11 12:28]

Hello Edith
This lovely sparrow looks really proud indeed, and no wonder. This is a marvellous picture with the most beautiful composition and lovely presentation.
Congratulations and TFS

you did it a good photo.
use of flash in a very good way.

Hi Edith,
A beautiful capture of this sparrow birdy. Nice details and composition. And I see no - points in this one. Thanks a lot for sharing.

very nice and lovely shot.
great details and nice BG.
well captured
Thanks for sharing

Hello Edith,
Very beautiful portrait shot of this sparrow you present here.
You've captured very nice pose of this little friend, with delicate details and fine POV.
Personally, I love this overall browny colouration very much. :-)
Well presented with nice frame too.
TFS and best wishes,
Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!!

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