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Copyright: Dan Bjarno (pac) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 67 W: 13 N: 157] (1783)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-03
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 20D, Canon 70-300 DO IS USM
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/2000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Swans, Swans, National Symbols [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-05-04 11:16
Viewed: 6744
Points: 32
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  • hekcik Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 291 W: 15 N: 305] (1827)
  • [2006-05-04 12:39]

Hi Dan,

Excellent shot.
Very good frame, details and expositon.

TFS :-)

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  • Scott Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 0 N: 356] (1752)
  • [2006-05-04 13:08]

Dan, you did well here, difficult to capture, well composed, good details.
Nice detail in the feather esay to over expose, and you didn't.

Hi Dan

Welcome to TN

Wonderful in-flight shot. Lovely depth of colour. Crisp, clear and sharp. Good light, POV and composition. Well done! :-)

Well done Dan,
great shot, perfect in the center of the frame.
Colors and details are good, exposure excellent.

Hi Dan, great capture f this swan. The focus is excelent also the frame and colours. Perfect light.

hi and welcome on TN.
excellent photograph, it is a very beautiful premiere.

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2006-05-04 21:44]

Great capture of this mute swan in flight: the elongated neck, the back-lit wing, the head's shadow on the wing, excellent feather details on that wing also. Wonderful POV. TFS. : )

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  • jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1538 W: 5 N: 2240] (12636)
  • [2006-05-04 21:55]

Bonsoir Dan!

Félicitations pour la lumière,les détails du pluage et la netteté.

merci pour l'envoie.


Hi Dan, excelent shot of fling swan. Nice background and his whitenes is more seeng.

Hi Dan

Welcome to TN, great first capture

In a friendly way Christophe

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  • fiyo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 5 N: 3475] (15161)
  • [2006-05-05 8:44]

Hello Dan,
Excellent ! I think there is nothing to add. Very well done.

Hi Dan and welcome to TN!
Excellent photo for your first post..
I would have liked to have taken this one myself :)
Very well done and have a Great weekend!

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  • Bac Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 93 W: 3 N: 33] (486)
  • [2006-05-05 15:53]

very good shot,and the white look very well.TFS.

A very good first post, Dan.
Nice composition and point of view.

I wish you the most cordial welcome on TrekNature.
In the pleasure to admire your next posts and to read your notes and critics.
Thank you for sharing.

Dan ....c'est la toute première fois que je vois sur Treknature un aussi beau et bon cliché ...je suis vraiment sous le charme et convaincu que nous en aurons d'autres

Technically perfect (POV, sharpness, colors, DOF), which is always difficult on flying subject.
Funny to see the shadow of the head on the wing.
(a note is always welcome)

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  • Tomasz (500)
  • [2007-02-18 6:17]

Hi Dan,
Very nice shot ,
Perfect composition and contrast,
Excellent colors and POV.

Hello Dan.

Excellent image, very good details and colors.



Echo hekcik's comment. I particularly like the shadow of the head on the wing.

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